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The '4 Cs of business writing'? Hogwash.

In doing some competitor research recently, I came across a glut of local training companies selling business writing workshops. Almost all of these seem to have borrowed their sales pitch from the same place - 1995 - because not one, not two, but five promise to teach delegates the '4 Cs of business writing'.
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These are, if you’re wondering, clarity, conciseness, completeness and correctness.

There’s also, in much of the proffered course content, generous reference to memos and letters. Sorry, what? It’s 2019, people. So if your ‘business writing’ course isn’t 80% email-focused, it’s out of touch. (I almost expected to see ‘how to write a fax’.)

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Now the problem isn’t necessarily with the training company, although one might expect better vetting from them – and higher quality research into what the market needs. The problem is with the trainer. This is why I’m so irate.

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The trainer should be teaching trainees how to read critically, summarise and structure documents and phrase arguments. There should be an emphasis on user behaviour, message planning and editorial quality control. All of this goes way beyond keeping it clear, concise, complete and correct.

In fact, the 4 Cs are so entry-level as to constitute basic permission to play.

So please listen up, trainers, facilitators and course content developers:


If you’re not studiously researching best practices (both global and local), keeping up to date with the skills that business writers in 2019 require and engaging with companies in the real world to find out what kinds of writing skills they need, you’re simply not doing your job. You’re just pretending.

You’re part of the reason that so many business-people – even highly educated ones – write badly or inefficiently in today’s workplace.


And in case you think that this is an empty rant intended only to draw attention to my business writing training courses, without adding actual value, here’s my take on the supposed 4 Cs of business writing, for the modern world:

Before: Clear


Uh, yes. Obviously. Otherwise, why bother? But: how?

The sales blurbs that I saw promised to teach trainees to create business writing that readers could understand without any difficulty. They suggest that writers use “no obscure words” and “no extraneous words”.

You mean, words like ‘obscure’ and ‘extraneous’?

After: Plain


Let’s replace C for clear with P for plain. The simplest, shortest, cleanest, most obvious word in every instance. Nothing must be looked up. Nothing is pretentious. The writer writes to express, not to impress (and so does the trainer.) Clarity goes without saying. Or, at least, it should.

Before: Concise


Oh for heaven’s sake. Yes. Of course. Leave out adjectives unless you absolutely need them and adverbs under all circumstances.

But there’s a lot more to conciseness than qualifiers and modifiers. What about sentence length? Paragraph length? Open space? Lists? Sub-heads? Bolding? Hyperlinks?

After: User-centric


Let’s replace C for concise with U for user-centric. Make every word count. Consider how the text will look on the page, as well as what it says.

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Be generous with visual breathing room. Guide the reader’s eye. Be sensitive to the reader’s time, attention span, medium of choice and information needs.

Before: Complete


No, no, no, no.

The goal is not to ensure that the reader has all the information they need, in case they make the wrong decision. That’s how you end up with documents so long your reader wants to jab a pencil in her own eye instead of engaging with it.

After: Focused


Let’s replace C for complete with F for focused. The goal, people, is focused and targeted business writing, that is specific to the audience, while also being relevant, timely and considered.

Any writing training that does not start with how to identify your audience and how to nail down each message’s specific objective and purpose is a waste of your valuable time and money.

Before: Correct


Argh. This one really annoys me. (No, I wasn’t truly annoyed til now. I was just harrumphing for effect.)

Obviously your content should be correct. This inane suggestion should go without saying and should be replaced with…


After: Friendly


Let’s replace C for correct with something that will make a nice memorable mneumonic for you. How about F for friendly?

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Not too friendly, but friendly enough to establish rapport, show that there’s a real human behind the message and stand out in a crowd of over-blown, oft-repeated, templated triteness.

So instead of the 4 Cs, I present to you Puff: plain, user-centric, focused and friendly. That’s how we should be doing it in 2019.
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About Tiffany Markman

Tiffany Markman is a highly opinionated copywriter, writing trainer and speaker who has worked for over 350 clients worldwide over the last 15 years. She hates misplaced apostrophes, old-fashioned business writing and the word 'revert'. She loves generous paragraphing, art, skulls and black coffee. Connect with her on tiffany at tiffanymarkman dot co dot za, or visit https://tiffanymarkman.co.za
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Brian Tristam Williams
The tone of this post is inappropriately trite for the medium. This rant would be better posted on a personal blog, where it would be subject to less scrutiny, and the irony of it would be on display to a smaller audience. For example, you advocate for as few words as possible, but you chose to go with “not one, not two, but five.” You could have just said “five,” you know? The cruft you added for emphasis is insipid and underwhelming. “No, no, no, no?” Are you sure you needed that fourth “no?” What were you saying about “simplest, shortest, cleanest?” “The goal, people,” - you keep going on these unnecessary, tepid, comma-encapsulated tangents—we understand that you are addressing “people.” Try to keep your sentences short; nobody needs the digression into “, in case you’re wondering,”. I’m sorry you feel that “obscure” is obscure, but then, how does “proffered” fit in on your pretentiousness scale? Add to that the incomplete sentences, the inconsistent use of different types of apostrophes and quotation marks, and the missing commas and hyphens, and I find my eyelids twitching, while I have subconcious nightmares about stones and houses made of glass.
Posted on 19 Aug 2019 10:58

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