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Comments on Am an up coming Events and Weddings Decor designer
 
Great start but...  by  Khush
there's too much flashing on the home page it distracts from trying to read what you do maybe you could remove the "start here" thingy.
"Wedding" is spelt incorrectly on your contacts page.

and I would suggest you focus only on the events part of your business and then direct your client to another website that deals with the IT side of your business cause as it is now it takes focus away from what exactly you are trying to sell.

add a gallery or porti of your work.


You could also work on the fonts a bit...
23 Sep 2008 16:00  Reply, Report this comment
Nice but you could do better  by  Lerato
The green background is also not doing justice to your website. Choose a colour that will work with all your decor pics.

Another thing is your website is too busy and it has too much info. Group everything neatly and make it look fresh.
25 Sep 2008 10:42  Reply, Report this comment
U could do far better  by  Big3 Media
No offence...I'm only trying to help you, that site is not gonna get you far. Weddings are all about elegance, sophistication, white & gold colours (not green and red). The picture quality on your site is really low.

I'm surprised that you offer web design as a service. None the less I can help you with design and SEO (marketing of your website). Visit my website @ www.big3media.co.za or email info@big3media.co.za
25 Sep 2008 11:58  Reply, Report this comment
Well................
The green background is not cutting it and there is too much colour mismatch, lack of "fangshue" dont know how to spell it but yeah your website lacks that. Ene e wa lwela dude from events decor to IT solutions, Anyway do what you have to do and keep on hustling. John malwela :-)
29 Sep 2008 12:16  Reply, Report this comment
Website Design  by  Noddie
It's functioning but the colour scheme is too much. It looks too much like something you can slap together in Frontpage.

Please see my website, http://nlottering.110mb.com I know I'm just advertising myself, but look at the colour scheme it must follow through, clean and neat, not to much bouncing around.
29 Sep 2008 13:16  Reply, Report this comment
Too much on one page
The home page is cluttered, the colours aren't complimentary at all and it looks like you're trying too hard to sell your businessess all at once.

1. Less is more - clean up the home page
2. Weddings are about lightheartedness - Try using softer colours
3. Show and tell - the resolution on your pics is low so up that a lot

looking forward to a new site.
N
30 Sep 2008 11:49  Reply, Report this comment
Good work for a beginner  by  Julls
I think that is good for someone starting out and I think that shows determination and belief in what you can do.I also think you are matured to want people to critique your work.

Now coming to the site, I agree that it is too flashy and there is just too much colour that does not coordinate therefore making it difficult for one to stick on the site, you lose interest;it's not a "keep me glued site".

I am sure you can do better. All the best.
1 Oct 2008 13:31  Reply, Report this comment






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