there's too much flashing on the home page it distracts from trying to read what you do maybe you could remove the "start here" thingy. "Wedding" is spelt incorrectly on your contacts page.
and I would suggest you focus only on the events part of your business and then direct your client to another website that deals with the IT side of your business cause as it is now it takes focus away from what exactly you are trying to sell.
No offence...I'm only trying to help you, that site is not gonna get you far. Weddings are all about elegance, sophistication, white & gold colours (not green and red). The picture quality on your site is really low.
I'm surprised that you offer web design as a service. None the less I can help you with design and SEO (marketing of your website). Visit my website @ www.big3media.co.za or email info@big3media.co.za
The green background is not cutting it and there is too much colour mismatch, lack of "fangshue" dont know how to spell it but yeah your website lacks that. Ene e wa lwela dude from events decor to IT solutions, Anyway do what you have to do and keep on hustling. John malwela :-)
It's functioning but the colour scheme is too much. It looks too much like something you can slap together in Frontpage.
Please see my website, http://nlottering.110mb.com I know I'm just advertising myself, but look at the colour scheme it must follow through, clean and neat, not to much bouncing around.
The home page is cluttered, the colours aren't complimentary at all and it looks like you're trying too hard to sell your businessess all at once.
1. Less is more - clean up the home page 2. Weddings are about lightheartedness - Try using softer colours 3. Show and tell - the resolution on your pics is low so up that a lot
I think that is good for someone starting out and I think that shows determination and belief in what you can do.I also think you are matured to want people to critique your work.
Now coming to the site, I agree that it is too flashy and there is just too much colour that does not coordinate therefore making it difficult for one to stick on the site, you lose interest;it's not a "keep me glued site".
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"Wedding" is spelt incorrectly on your contacts page.
and I would suggest you focus only on the events part of your business and then direct your client to another website that deals with the IT side of your business cause as it is now it takes focus away from what exactly you are trying to sell.
add a gallery or porti of your work.
You could also work on the fonts a bit...