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AAA School of Advertising tackles bad ad English

4 Dec 2005 13:2316 commentsBizLike
After many concerned advertising agency executives voiced their low opinion of the quality of English copywriting in advertisements, the Gauteng campus of the AAA School of Advertising has taken a few much needed steps to improve the ability of its ability learners to write acceptable English. In conjunction with the University of Johannesburg, it has retained Gaye Neille, who holds honours in Linguistics and is currently studying for her Master's.
Gaye Neille presents the trophy for most improved English language proficiency to first year copywriting student Emile Spies
Like many tertiary institutions, the School is finding the standard of language skills of the incoming learners alarming. Even matriculants with good marks in Higher Grade English have difficulty expressing themselves in writing, while the quality of syntax and grammar is appalling.

Neille has adapted a programme originally intended for law students to develop an English Language Proficiency course for AAA copywriting learners but because the course is ancillary to the curriculum, it has been compressed into just six weeks. "The consequences of a teaching policy that lacks rigour, drilling or memorising of rules of grammar, syntax and particularly spelling, cannot be put right overnight," said Neille. "However, we can address some of the most common and basic errors."

An example is the correct use of the apostrophe. In an initial diagnostic test, aspirant copywriters were able to place the apostrophe correctly in a contraction or possessive use in less than 12 percent of cases.

The first course has been completed and the school's copywriting graduates of 2005 will be entering the industry with a much improved standard of English. However, the success of the course depends heavily on the commitment of the students themselves.

"Those who really applied themselves made enormous strides in bettering the quality of their written communication," Neille observed. "Unfortunately, there will always be some who lack the dedication and professionalism to deliver the superior level of English expected of published writers."

Due to the overwhelming acceptance of this year's trial course, it will be repeated in 2006 and incorporated on a national scale into the copywriting curriculum at the AAA School of Advertising. Deirdre van Coller at the Cape Town campus is liaising with Prof. Watson at the University of Cape Town to implement the proficiency programme there. The school's faculty members also intend extending the course to the marketing discipline, where the need is just as great.

The AAA School has full accreditation with the South African Qualifications Authority (SAQA) and is the only education institution in Southern Africa to be recognised by the International Advertising Association (IAA), USA. The school offers both BA degree and diploma courses.
 
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Ann
Proofreaders?-
Is the ad industry not employing proofreaders and copy editors then? Posted on 5 Dec 2005 17:20
bathoz
Yup.-
They're called copywriters. Hence the concern. Posted on 5 Dec 2005 17:25
KS
You gets what you pay for/fore/four/4-
For as long as proofreaders, sub-editors, senior sub-editors, copy editors, editors themselves, copywriters and writers in general are paid so appallingly - not so much in the advertising world but certainly in the world of pure writing, ie publishing - expect more/moor bad writing and an almost complete lack of basic punctuation and grammar. Posted on 6 Dec 2005 14:18
Ironic - errors in the editorial commenting on errors-
I suggest that the writer of this piece gets a proofreader to check the copy - I've spotted two errors in the first paragraph! Ironic, isn't it? Posted on 5 Dec 2005 17:48
Sandile Ngidi
What About African Languages-
It's pretty remarkable that the AAA is irked by bad ad English into action. But here's something pretty ugly for the industry; as a Zulu speaker and writer, I know that Zulu copywriting warrants serious attention. I have had similar sentiments from industry colleagues and friends who speak other African languages with a great degree of proficiency. You might be aware that according to the 2001 census, 23.8% of South Africans have isiZulu as their mother tongue,followed by 17.6% for isiXhosa, 13.3% for Afrikaans, 9.4% for Sepedi, and 8.2% each for English and Setswana. One hopes that the AAA is not attending to English mainly because English speakers are a vocally articulate minority. Secondly, if the school's position is about the integrity of the copywriting trade and of course, attaining clear brand communication on behalf of clients, other African languages ought to be treated with the same degree of seriousness. If fong kong copywriting is unacceptable for English,it's equally unacceptable and reprehensible for other African languages. Posted on 6 Dec 2005 07:31
Mthunzi Calata
African languages deserve equal attention-
I agree with Sandile Ngidi that it's high time that the relevant authorities put their money where their mouths are, and started doing something about African languages. As a Xhosa speaker, I find it disturbing that not enough is being done to improve African languages in copywriting when we all agree that there is a need for that. Posted on 6 Feb 2006 11:38
Lisa Mc Namara
No more 'For Free!"-
At last! Posted on 6 Dec 2005 08:23
Buhle
Get African Languages right too!-
I am encouraged that there is concern about language use and would also hope that this concern also applies to African languages.

It is my wish that these comments filter back to the big guns of the industry so that they will note our concern regarding the calloulousness applied when it comes to African languages.

Our roads signs and places of national significance are littered with incorrect spelling. When are people going to give the same respect to African languages. The attitude of anything will do or spell it as you imagine it has to end!

The arrogance that people display towards indigenouse languages can also be seen in job advertisements. Some job specs say that 'the candidate must be fluent in English and "any black" language'! Any black language, what is a black language?

Buhle Posted on 6 Dec 2005 09:54
Hugh
"Indigenouse"-
I believe that indigenous is spelled without the "e" on the end :) Posted on 6 Dec 2005 20:40
About time
No more -
It's up to those who care about the subject to look for ways to stop the linguistic rot in SA.We need more programmes like that of the AAA.
Bottom line: the "dumbing down" of language - any language - in this country continues unchecked. It's a fringe benefit of globalisation. Irritating, nonsense-words filter in via the media with puerile continuity scripts describing every subsequent season of a series as an "All-new season of Desperate Housewives" (or 24, CSI, CSI Miami, ad nauseum).THOSE copywriters don't bother to rewrite anything they receive from the USofA.
"All-new" is typical of "words" that are then passed on to be translated into the other official languages.It's interesting - and damning - that the biggest media group in the country, Naspers, goes to great lengths to protect the standards of the newest language of our country (Afrikaans) but doesn't invest the same money and resources (ATKV related and others) into any other South African languages.Its media are among the primary abusers of English today.(Read any column written by the Head of Journalism: Stellenbosch University on its News24.co.za site to see how badly (well?) English can be mutilated)!
And then, there's the problem that those of us with more thumbs than fingers get to type emails like this, thereby further mutilating our language!
Have you done something for your language today?(Copyright pending, of course) Posted on 6 Dec 2005 11:58
CC
Syntax vs grammar-
When I majored in linguistics, syntax was considered part of the total grammar of a language, along with morphology, phonology, semantics etc.
Why have they now been separated? This only confused learners more. Posted on 6 Dec 2005 14:21
w///
'Tis goode, this pejorative!-
Precision communication of creative interpretation of specific identification. Posted on 7 Dec 2005 12:04
Nancy
Good for you-
Good for you... just wish we could do the same for all the languages involved in advertising and marketing. Posted on 19 Dec 2005 08:18
Taryn
Promising first step-
Well done to AAA for admitting this problem exists and putting an action plan into place. Now for other institutions to jump on the bandwagon? I for one would be thrilled to become a part of this project. Posted on 19 Dec 2005 12:20
gama lami
demografiks-
hayi! suka bangaki abantu abamnyama emzansi.obani aba thenga kakhulu? yithi abantu.

indijuiceous are in great numbers in S.A. some want to be copywriters.remember that we indijuiceous people want to community-cate with ours we have the most buying power and most loyal to the brands. pefekt or not we buy if we know wat it dos. Posted on 22 Dec 2005 15:35
Edward Jeffrey
We can assist with bad ad English-
give me a call 082 969 1151 - 011 771 7212 Posted on 12 Jan 2006 16:03
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